for some reason, i really like my haiku >.>

[phosfate]

Haiku2 for annlarimer
burbled as it came one two one two and through and through the tulgey wood
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Created by Grahame

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[terl-girl.livejournal.com]

Mine was:

i'm not sure jesus
himself could dig us out of
this shithole that

It's strangely fitting.

whoops, that didn't work...

[viedma.livejournal.com]

trying again.

work wearing my new
twitter account doing it
on the web is nice

Isn't it, though?

[ahli.livejournal.com]

Haiku2 for ahli

bill and how about
those knockers she has the best
sense of humour next


Yup, pretty much.

[dr-tectonic.livejournal.com]

I can't remember what it originally picked for the third line, so I just selected an appropriate segment from the source post, because the result is actually remarkably good:

Serpentine

smack smack smack smack smack!
under the hood of the car
is not a good noise

[annlarimer.livejournal.com]

I chortled.