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phosfateSubj: fanfic
Date: 5/24/2004 3:15:31 PM Eastern Daylight Time
From: "Z" <******@*****.com>
To: Everheart @ aol . com
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In your fic "Return to the Planet where everybody was Gangsters" it is really pointless and makes no sense!! It really confused me and made my L.A. teacher almost cry!!
Date: 5/24/2004 3:15:31 PM Eastern Daylight Time
From: "Z" <******@*****.com>
To: Everheart @ aol . com
Sent from the Internet (Details)
In your fic "Return to the Planet where everybody was Gangsters" it is really pointless and makes no sense!! It really confused me and made my L.A. teacher almost cry!!
