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[phosfate]

Subj: fanfic
Date: 5/24/2004 3:15:31 PM Eastern Daylight Time
From: "Z" <******@*****.com>
To: Everheart @ aol . com
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In your fic "Return to the Planet where everybody was Gangsters" it is really pointless and makes no sense!! It really confused me and made my L.A. teacher almost cry!!

Comments

[jeff-morris.livejournal.com]

Bravo! Encore!

JSM

[viedma.livejournal.com]

You rock! Now I'm wondering what an L.A. teacher is exactly...

[mechturtle.livejournal.com]

"Language Arts", I think.

Will there be another "Not the MW*C Guide" this year?

[annlarimer.livejournal.com]

Not with half the team missing, nope.

[mechturtle.livejournal.com]

Drat. :(

[cybertardis.livejournal.com]

Excellent!!!!!

--sah

[ragdoll.livejournal.com]

*applauds wildly* The fic itself is pretty damned good too. Erm, bad. Erm, unbelievably awful. :)

[annlarimer.livejournal.com]

Click on the "Frank Smith's Diary" link at the right for a link to more horror. "My First X-Files Story" will...um... Actually, don't click. Never mind.

[ragdoll.livejournal.com]

Okay. I did. I think that's now my favouritest X-file story ever. If only Mulder got naked in it.

Fic

[danakate.livejournal.com]

That is a fine story.

Re: Fic

[annlarimer.livejournal.com]

Thank you. I feel it really captured the flavor of classic Trek in its heyday.

Re: Fic

[danakate.livejournal.com]

Indeed, annlarimer.

I especially liked the emphasis on the Captain's chair, as it was practically a character in and of itself. Nice that Captain Kirk didn't abandon it on the Enterprise.

*vigorous nodding*

[silver-rabbit.livejournal.com]

That was beautiful. I nearly cried at the end when Captain Kirk, captain of the starship "Enterprise," had his chair (that he sat in because he was the captain) brought down to the planet where everyone was gansters, even Spock the alien First Officer who had pointy ears because he was an alien. Bravo, Ms. Larimer, bravo!

I assumed L. A. meant their teacher was from Los Angelos, because I am dumb.

[ouchie.livejournal.com]

Write back saying "Tell your teacher it's because Gangsters come from Chicago, not L.A."

[ouchie.livejournal.com]

Also, that story rocked. Maybe the person just never saw the episode where they went to the Planet Where Everybody Was Gangsters.

[annlarimer.livejournal.com]

NOOOOOOOO!!! THAT'S THE BEST EPISODE!

[ouchie.livejournal.com]

I KNOW! It had dudes named Krako and Oxmyx!! Your story should be subtitled "A Few More Pieces Of The Action" :D :D

[annlarimer.livejournal.com]

*takes a lot of aspirin*

[isengar-took.livejournal.com]

*is in awe*

*pokes the mun as asks why the mun can't write like that instead of with the asterics and the lack of description and the seaweed and all*

[annlarimer.livejournal.com]

*pets the mun*

Pretend you're 8 and have just had an assload of Dr Pepper and Halloween candy.